Very well done! Always loved your art style!
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Very well done! Always loved your art style!
The art isn't necessarily bad, I would recommend focusing more on the backgrounds to make them more detailed, but other than that it's not bad.
My main issue with all the comic pages that you've posted so far is that the structure of the comic is very lackluster, there's a lot of white on screen, and from your other pieces there's a lot of black. I would suggest putting more panels on one page to make sure they fill up more space so that each page can have more substance, and I would also recommend putting some boarders around each panel.
I would suggest a minimum of six panels per page.
That's what I would change.
Age 23, Other
Joined on 6/19/17